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THE SPARKLING STAR



Once upon a time, in a distant place in space, was born a star whose shine was brighter then all others. The time has passed and the star had grown pretty and graceful, always iluminating the dark nights.

However, during the day, the star used to spend her time looking down to our planet and admiring one of our most sacred treasures: the love. Seeing how pure and happy love made our people, the star wished she could feel it by herself, but love was something stars couldn't understand. Then, the little shiny star asked the Superior Stars a day on our planet, so she could learn more about that precious thing. Still, they denied the request.

Not far from there, an evil black hole, who was envious of the star shine and beauty, saw the star sadness. Afterward, as fast as she could, the black hole approached in secret the little star, and offered her a chance to go to our planet and stay until she could fully understand the meaning of love. Taken by her own naivety, the star accepted the propose and, when the night came, the brightest star wasn't there anymore to shine.

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Far, far away from the stars, here on our planet, lived a powerful king , his wife and their handsome son. It was a day of joy and delight on the kingdom, and all the nobles and plebeians got together to celebrate the prince birthday. However, as much as the prince wanted to join the celebration, he could't pretend he was pleased: loneliness and sadness filled his heart.  His best friends were the stars, but his favourite and loved one had disappeared from his sight over the last few nights. That star was his loyal listener and counselor.

And so, during a calm and thoughtful walk on the kingdom forest, the prince walked into the star, who was attracted to the kingdom by the songs and colorful fireworks of the party. They spent the night together and ,suddenly, the star finally recognized what was love and the loneliness of the prince went away. He knew somehow, that the pretty lady was his closest friend, his precious star.

But the black hole wasn't glad at all with that situation. For her, the star would go to our planet, suffer in the hands of love and lose her shine forever. She had to take control over them, and so, the black hole decided to destroy the hole planet, by sucking it into her and keeping it there for all the eternity, fating it to oblivion.

The Superior Stars, who discovered the black hole's plans, convened all the stars from the galaxy and together, they made the most powerful army on the space. They fought until our planet was fully protected from her evilness, until the black hole was the one fated to oblivion. When the battle was over, and the space was once again safe, the prince proposed to the shiny star who, however, still had her obligations and knew her place was on the dark sky, iluminating the night.

Seeing how much the star loved the prince, the Superior Stars decided to let the star go after her own happiness, allowing her to marry him. By day, the star would be on the kingdom, as a princess; by night, the star would be shining more than ever on the space, being watched by her true love. And then together, the prince and the sparkling star, lived happily ever after.

The End



by: mrvictorbrs #don'tcopyplz
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Ever After High was released yesterday yet but I'm already in love with this!! :heart: Everything is just so lovely and owwn.
So, as I said on Tumblr, instead of making an OC of an existing fairytale, I will make an alter-ego version of Allie: Stallie Star.

The 'fairytale' is actually a fairytale from Allie's planet called 'The Sparkling Star' and I've decided to write and upload it, so Stallie story makes some sense in the end. I really like the story after all, it would be a fairytale I would enjoy listening when kid.

ps: Yeah, I've changed Stallie's color scheme (compared to the art I've posted on Tumblr :D)
ps˛: Please, ignore my English mistakes Lol
psł: Remembering that it's a fairytale from Allie's planet, so 'our planet' is not Earth, but her planet itself.

Visit my Tumblr -> [link]
Hope you all like it, and comment.
See ya,
V.
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Phantomotheoperaphan Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Ripper!!!:happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: 
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:iconphantomotheoperaphan:
Awwww. This is a nice story. Did you come up with the story?
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mrvictorbrs Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes :)
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MHFanForever Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
DID YOU KNOW THAT C.A CUPID IS LEAVING MONSTER HIGH TO GO TO EVER AFTER HIGH
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mrvictorbrs Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I do!! And I love it :heart:
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SaintCem Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such a sweet story! It was a nice read! And Stallie's art looks amazing as well, of course! :)
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mrvictorbrs Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, it was fun to write it :heart:
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LilMonsterMix Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful! I love the story!
And yes, I am already in love with Ever After High also! I want pretty much all of them in a doll! XD
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mrvictorbrs Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D I just hope the doll fulfill my expectations, really lol
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